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Before And After: Comic Page by Lunalli-Chan Before And After: Comic Page by Lunalli-Chan
Since I haven't spammed you all with enough improvement memes the last few weeks, here's another before and after meme, this time with the first page of my comic, Sylva, since I've re-done it a bajillion times!  (Also, speaking of my comic, if you aren't familiar with it already, you can check it out here)

That first one, dude....... the bush looks like it's made out of cat fur lol. The second one I actually still kinda like. Lineart is just too much of a pain, though and I didn't want to gradually phase it out because I just hate doing lineart so much ;A; Plus, I'd decided to go in a bit of a different route with the flow and overall look. I really love the new page and the looser art style is WAY more fun. I feel like the page is just overall more visually pleasing in the newest version.

All right, I'm done spamming things tonight lol :dummy:

blank meme can be found here
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:iconlooye:
Looye Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice shadin' improvement
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you~! :D
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:iconpersoninexistance:
PersoninExistance Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
You improved a lot since then, it looks cool!
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you, I'm glad you think so! XD
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SmexyViButt Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome!! The last one feels really amazing !
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Thanks!! XD Glad you think so~! :la:
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:iconlocaexis:
Locaexis Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Nice improvement~! c:
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you! ^_^
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:iconageha-nacht:
ageha-nacht Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student General Artist
The vibe is definitely more dramatic in the final one. Your hard work is really showing 👌😁
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Yay, thank you! Glad you think so! XD
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:iconchiyuuhi:
Chiyuuhi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Amazing improvement :D I keep thinking it can't get better, but it keeps getting better and better ^_^
I love the most recent version
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Aww, thank you haha!! :tighthug:
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:iconfreya-athena:
Freya-Athena Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017
I can see that your understanding of dynamic poses and perspective have greatly improved. Keep drawing, I love your style!!
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
I'm glad you think it shows! Thank you, I'll certainly do my best :D
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:iconnerdynordy:
nerdynordy Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Filmographer
You've really improved! I love this final outcome
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:iconlunalli-chan:
Lunalli-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Hobbyist
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so! :la:
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:iconnerdynordy:
nerdynordy Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Filmographer
no problem :D
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